pitch wars wishlist

Pitch Wars 2019

Welcome to our wishlist! We’re Julie and Sarah, aka GreenTEAm, Middle Grade co-mentors for Pitch Wars 2019! Pitch Wars is a mentoring program where published/agented authors, editors, or industry interns choose one writer each to spend three months revising their manuscript. It ends in February with an Agent Showcase, where literary agents can read a pitch/first page and request to read more.

Who is GreenTEAm? 🍵

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Photo caption: Julie (left) and Sarah (right) are very pleased to meet you!

Julie Abe is the author of the middle grade fantasy EVA EVERGREEN, SEMI-MAGICAL WITCH (2020 / Little, Brown Young Readers) and the second book in the series, releasing 2021. She has lived in Silicon Valley, spent many humid summers in Japan, and currently basks in the sunshine of Southern California with never enough books or tea, where she creates stories about magical adventures. Website | Instagram | Twitter | Goodreads

Sarah Suk (pronounced sooke like soup with a K) graduated from the University of British Columbia with a Major in English Literature and a Minor in Creative Writing. Since then, she has worked at an ice cream store, lived in Seoul, South Korea to intern with an NGO called Liberty in North Korea, and pursued her many story ideas, one word at a time. She currently lives in Vancouver, writing Middle Grade and Young Adult fiction, and is represented by Linda Epstein at Emerald City Literary Agency. Website | Instagram | Twitter

We connected online a few years back and immediately bonded over a shared love of Japanese desserts and, of course, magical stories. Since then, we’ve swapped manuscripts, gone on writing retreats, and become close friends with a deep appreciation for sending each other food photos and french fry emojis. We’re so excited to pair up as Pitch Wars co-mentors and we can’t wait to see what brilliant Middle Grade stories are out there!

Caption: GIF of delightful green tea being poured from a teapot.

Our Mentoring Style

Our mentee will get two edit letters co-written by us (one at the beginning of the edit window and the second after you turn in your revised manuscript to us). Our edit letters will include all the things that gave us heart eyes about your story, as well as some tough love on points that could be stronger. Though we can’t guarantee requests, agents, or book deals, we can promise to help you refine your manuscript to be the best that it can be! With that said, we believe that you as the writer know your story better than anyone and we will never try to make your decisions for you. Rather, we are here to guide and support you through the process.

Along the way, and even after the Agent Showcase, we're available to chat, commiserate about the query trenches, talk about how to make your story ~*shine*~, and even walk with you through your publishing life with an agent/editor. We’re here to cheer you on through Pitch Wars and beyond!

Caption: GIF of root vegetables rooting for YOU!

Our Middle Grade Genre List:

(Only Middle Grade, please! We are not open to YA/Adult submissions).

  • Graphic Novels

  • Fantasy

  • Literary

  • Adventure

  • Contemporary

  • Steampunk

  • Historical

  • Mystery

  • Retellings

  • STEM

  • Science Fiction

What We’re Looking For:

  • Authors from marginalized groups. We would love to see more stories from underrepresented voices

  • A modern day Stargirl

  • Stories with the humor and adventure of Sal and Gabi Break the Universe

  • Graphic novels and graphic novel hybrids like Pie in the Sky

  • A distinct MG voice! Ex: Strong voices such as Anna-Marie McLemore and Dusti Bowling

  • Found families and tight friendships

  • Sweeping adventures with high stakes/high rewards

  • A middle grade version of Warcross

  • A *fun* story that’s an escape

  • Anything that can comp Into the Spiderverse

  • Character driven stories. We love a strong character arc!

  • Vibrant, memorable settings

  • Please include content warnings/trigger warnings if needed

We’re Not the Right Mentor for:

  • Animal / Non-Human Protagonists

  • Ghosts / Vampires / Werewolves / Fairies / Elves

  • Gross humor

  • Stories where religion is the main focus

  • In verse unless it strongly fits one of our “What We’re Looking For” criteria

Some of Our Favorite Books Include...

  • Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli

  • The Astonishing Color of After by Emily X.R. Pan

  • Sal and Gabi Break the Universe by Carlos Hernandez

  • I’ll Give You the Sun by Jandy Nelson

  • Wicked Fox by Kat Cho

  • Keeper of the Lost Cities by Shannon Messenger

  • The Lockwood Series by Jonathan Stroud

  • Spin the Dawn by Elizabeth Lim

  • Nevermoor by Jessica Townsend

  • Wild Beauty by Anna-Marie McLemore

  • Amal Unbound by Aisha Saeed

  • The Girl Who Drank the Moon by Kelly Barnhill

If you feel like our mentorship style and wishlist is a good fit for you, we hope you'll apply to us. We look forward to your submissions! Sending good thoughts and virtual green tea your way!

Click here to see all Pitch Wars mentor wishlists. You can also find our amazing fellow Middle Grade mentors listed below. Be sure to check them out to see what they’re looking for!

ireland writer tours

Back in July, I went on the Ireland Writer Tours, a week long tour slash writing conference held in (you guessed it) Ireland! This was a really special trip, one that I am beyond grateful to have had the opportunity to attend. I could probably go on for pages about the many cows I beheld, the soups that I ate, and the moments that left both my heart and my phone photo app 100% full. But for the sake of blog post brevity, I’ll keep it short(er) and share my top five highlights from the trip:



Hands down the best part of the Ireland Writer Tours was the people that I met through it. I loved learning from our amazing instructors, literary agent Thao Le and YA fantasy author Julie C. Dao, and doing it with a group of kickass fellow writers from all different walks of life. Honestly, what a stellar group. So thankful for all the wisdom and laughter that we shared together!


The Cliffs of Moher was my number one anticipated tour stop and it definitely did not disappoint. This was the place where Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince was filmed! I could almost see Harry and Dumbledore in the shadows of the fog… -squints- or wait is that just another cow? Anyway, SURREAL! If you’re ever in Ireland, I would highly recommend checking this place out.



A series of captions for the photos above from our day trip to Inishmore, the largest of the Aran Islands:

  • Ferry ride to the island.

  • Dún Aonghasa, a prehistoric hill fort at the edge of a 100-meter-high cliff. As you can see, there is ZERO semblance of a fence or barrier along that cliff edge. You better believe I crab walked my way to the edge (and by edge, I mean a nice safe five feet away from it) so I could could get a quick photo before running back to safety. As terrifying as this was for my fear of heights, I would say it actually turned out to be my favourite tour spot, even more than the Cliffs of Moher. I loved the unexpected wonder of it.

  • One of many popular Aran sweater shops.

  • The yummiest scone with the BEST raspberry jam.

  • The Wormhole, a naturally made swimming pool. This was very cool! I’m pretty sure we all wanted to grab a floatie and a drink with a little umbrella in it and jump in that water.



After the tour ended, I spent an extra day in Dublin city. Some things I saw:

  • The famous Trinity College Library. Not pictured: the hundreds of tourists standing next to me, taking this exact same picture. However, even with all the people, it was still very awe inspiring to be surrounded by so many historic books.

  • A mural while wandering the streets of Dublin.

  • A pub! There were lots of these, but this one looked particularly nice at golden hour.

  • The view from Ha’penny Bridge.

  • This random Korean restaurant??? Susan and I ended up eating dinner here and it was actually not bad. I’m not sure if it’s because it was actually not bad or because I was going through such major Korean food withdrawals that anything would do, but either way, I’m glad we stumbled upon it!


You bet ice cream & gelato gets a whole section to itself. Let’s discuss these flavours, shall we?

  • Here we have my favourite ice cream of the trip from Murphy’s, a cone with fresh strawberry and honeycomb caramel. Honeycomb was a big thing in Ireland which was a real delight.

  • My favourite flavour, mint chocolate chip! This was from an award winning ice cream shop but in my opinion, it was just ok. It still made me happy to eat it though.

  • Gelato at Gino’s with my new friend, Rachel Greenlaw. She got mint chocolate chip (because she knows what’s up) and I got Malteser. It was yummy, but you know what would have made it yummier? If there were actual crunchy pieces of Malteser inside. YES.

  • I don’t remember where this was and I didn’t even get a whole scoop because I was too full, but this was Bailey’s gelato! I wish I had been hungry enough to get a cup of it. (And yes, I was that person who walked in, asked for a sample, and walked out. Hey, I’m on vacation!).

  • There was a giant grocery store across from our inn and they had special ice creams that we don’t have in Canada. For example, this TOBLERONE ICE CREAM BAR! What! It tasted exactly like I thought it would. I’m sad we don’t have them here.

  • And finally, this mint chip ice cream bar because, as I said before, I love mint chip.

That’s it for the highlights! Thanks, Ireland, for the plethora of castles and monasteries and fairy forests, and for all the inspiration you gave me. And now, to write!!

photo diary: julie & tara in vancouver

Julie and Tara, a couple writing friends from the States, came to visit Vancouver last week which means cue food, cue hang outs, and cue me being That Person who has to get a photo of everything (hey what can I say, I love my camera. Oh, and my friends too). Sarah H and I toured them around Lynn Valley aka Marvel At Nature 101 and Deep Cove aka Tara’s new favourite place in the world. We had tacos and walked by the waterfront with Kaya and visited Richmond Night Market with Grace where we indulged in everything from dill pickle and roasted garlic rotatoes to matcha soufflé pancakes topped with red bean and mochi. Here are a few snapshots from their visit :)


Shout out to Julie and Tara’s creepy Airbnb that cut power on the first night and this guy at the night market whose job it was to stand in the water and supervise these children peddling boats. They’re the real MVPs of the week!

retreat to lake tahoe (sort of)

Earlier this month, I went on a writing retreat to Lake Tahoe. Sort of. We were actually in Truckee which is more north of Tahoe, and the lake we visited was not, in fact, Lake Tahoe as I’d first believed. Truthfully, I spent the majority of the weekend not really knowing where I was. But that’s besides the point. The important thing is! I went on a retreat with some dear writing friends and this is a post to commemorate the wonderful time we had together. Cue photos.

I chose maybe the most inconvenient and convoluted way to get to my destination, but that too is besides the point. Let’s focus instead on the beautiful sunrise I caught from the airplane window on my first flight (ooo ahh). And look at the free biscuits and tea I got on my second flight (ooo ahh). And don’t forget the fancy Starbucks drink I got before my third flight, which I texted to my boyfriend to show him what a great time I’m having (oo- wait is that just water? …let’s move along).

All of the above was worth it when I reunited with with these ladies:


Hooray! Let the fun begin! But first, quick introductions.

Susan Lee: Writer of YA contemporary that is laugh out loud hilarious and hits you right in the feels. Follow her on Twitter.

Grace Shim: Writer of YA contemporary featuring Korean teens that make me go ‘omg that was ME in high school!’ Follow her on Twitter.

Jess Kim: Writer of MG contemporary that will make your heart grow three sizes like the Grinch. Follow her on Twitter and find her book Stand Up, Yumi Chung! (Kokila/Penguin, 2020) on Goodreads.

Julie Abe: Writer of MG fantasy but also pretty much everything else (she talented). Also the feeder of my Japanese snack addiction. Follow her on Twitter and find her book Eva Evergreen, Semi-Magical Witch (Little Brown, 2020) on Goodreads.

Three words to describe this weekend:

1) Inspiring. From story brainstorm sessions to talking about our personal writing journeys, dreams, pitfalls, and goals, I felt inspired to keep on keeping on and to write the stories of my heart. I’m grateful for friends who not only remind me to press on, but model it for me in the way they live their own lives.

2) Celebratory. This retreat was extra special because we got to celebrate Susan’s agent signing! Woohoo!! This calls for not one, but two cakes! Also, a big shoutout to Susan for being our amazing chef for the weekend. The photo on the right is of her cutting strawberries for us. Seriously, what did we do to deserve her?


3) Refreshing. There’s something about soaking in nature and the presence of good friends that is so rejuvenating. I said it before, but I’ll say it again. I’m so so grateful for these ladies. I’m also grateful for snow capped mountains, belly aching laughs, and cup ramen.

On that note, I’ll end with these photos from the lake that was not Lake Tahoe. Til next time!

writing bullet journal

I’ve always loved looking at other people’s bullet journals and watching Plan With Me videos, but I never thought I would keep one for myself. I like using pre-made planners to organize my schedule, and keeping a mood or habit tracker didn’t appeal to me very much. But! With that said, there is one thing I always need help keeping track of and that is: MY WRITING GOALS.

So, this past month, I decided to make a bullet journal dedicated exclusively to writing. Here’s what it looks like:

LEFT: A cover page! I chose pigs as the theme for my February spread in honour of Lunar New Year. Fun fact: my mom was born in the year of the pig so she has little pig figurines all over the house. They’re her favourite animal. RIGHT: A monthly calendar! For each day I meet my goal, I get a sticker on this page. It felt pretty rewarding to look back and see all the stickers I earned this month. Also, see the pig in the bottom right corner rocking the Korean pama? That was also a touch of mom inspiration.

Here are two examples of my weekly spreads. Each day, I write down my daily goals here. Making daily goals was super helpful for me. I used to make general deadline-based goals, like: ‘By the end of the month, I want to be done this draft!’ or ‘By Feb 15th, I will be finished Act 1!’ This didn’t work so well for me because it kept my eyes on the deadline, not on the present day where work actually gets done. More often than not, the deadline would feel so far away that I would put off doing any work because I felt like I had all the time in the world. Then D-Day would sneak up on me and I would be frantically calculating how many words I have to write per day to still make it.

I still set a general deadline to give me a finish line to work towards, but from there, I create daily goals to make it happen. The biggest change for me was setting my daily goals either the morning of or the night before, taking into consideration everything I accomplished or had to adjust in the last 24 hours. Before, I used to make daily goals like, ‘I’m going to write 1000 words per day!’ and then I’d miss a day and have to write 2000 words the next day to make up for it and then I’d miss that day and so on and so forth until I’d end up lying on the floor, staring blankly at the ceiling and wondering where I went wrong. The difference is subtle, but I think really key. Pre-setting a series of daily goals makes me shape my day around them and if I miss one day, the rest of my days become more inflexible. Setting goals for each new day while being mindful of what that day holds for me is, I find, more forgiving and also more likely to be accomplished. Our goals should work for us to help us get to where we want to go, not make us tip into an existential crisis when we can’t meet them.

Anyway! This system has been working really well for me and my writing. It might change in the future as my needs and preferences change, but for now I’m going to keep going with it. Here’s a sneak peek of what I have prepared for March:

If you couldn’t tell, I like eggs. I’m especially proud of the tamago nigiri I managed to sneak in this spread. Hehe. Whatever you’re working on this month and next, these eggs and I are cheering you on!

twenty nineteen

New Year’s is always an interesting time for me because I am, by nature, a very reflective person. I love journaling and thinking about where I’ve been and where I want to be. While January 1st isn’t the only day of the year I make resolutions, I like that it’s the time of year where everyone is sharing theirs. I appreciate the collectivity of it, and so! Here is a blog post to ring in the new year and share a bit about my goals.

In 2018, I decided to change the way I think about goal setting. I wrote a Twitter thread on it a few months back, but I’d like to share it here as well. Instead of thinking of it as ‘I met my goal = success!' VS ‘I didn’t = failure :(‘ I’ve started thinking more along the lines of ‘today I’m going to CRUSH IT or ADJUST IT.’

CRUSH IT: Some days I crush my goals. I meet them, high five them, and send them flying into outer space. I get the job done and it feels really, really good. But some days, lots of days… I don’t.

ADJUST IT: I often underestimate the time, resources, and energy (mental, emotional, and physical) needed to meet my goals. And you never know what unpredictable thing will throw me off my tracks. But that’s ok. It doesn’t mean I’ve failed; it just means I need to re-adjust my goals for the day and meet myself where I am.

It’s ok to learn as you go, to change your mind, and to see your goals as more malleable than rigid. Having to adjust as you go doesn’t make you too slow, incapable, lazy, or any of the other things we tell ourselves. It makes you human.

So today, this year, set out to crush your goals. And if you don’t meet them, adjust them for tomorrow in a way that you can. Here are a few of mine:

  • Finish writing my current Middle Grade WIP.

  • Take more photos & read more poetry.

  • Be more active! Exercise, go on walks, do my physio stretches daily.

  • Spend more time in the mountains & by the water.

  • And my overarching theme for the year (that I hope will stick for life): be present.

Like I said, I love looking back and looking forward. I live in the past with hopes for the future, but this year I want to be better at living in the now and being present in the present.

Whatever your hopes are for 2019, I’m rooting for you. I hope we all get to know ourselves a little better this year than we did in the last. Happy New Year everybody!

godmothers retreat

A couple weeks ago, I went on my first ever writing retreat with a few friends. We packed up the car, drove to the ferry, and crossed the water over to Mayne Island where we spent the weekend in a cabin full of blankets, writing, brainstorming, and filling our bellies with cheese, cheese, and more cheese.

We call ourselves the Godmothers, as in, the godmothers to each other’s book babies. Sarah H, Carly, Grace, and I met in a university Creative Writing class almost four years ago. We happened to be sitting on the same side of the classroom the day we formed critique groups and we’ve stayed that way ever since (a critique group, I mean. We didn’t become permanent fixtures of the classroom). From writing dates in donut shops to annual Secret Santa gift exchanges, I have many reasons to be thankful for these ladies. They were my Critique Partners before I even knew what Critique Partners were and I’m glad I got to experience my first writing retreat with them. It feels fitting.



Morning writing session
Afternoon writing session
Evening writing session, but more accurately, playing games, reading books, sleeping off sickness symptoms, and in my case, secretly watching figure skating videos on YouTube (specifically this video of Yuzuru Hanyu in Helsinki. Seriously, how amazing is he??)

We also went for walks around the island to stretch our legs. On one of our expeditions, Carly and I got lost trying to find the Japanese Garden and came across this view.

This is one of my favourite things about living in BC. That you can just stumble on a window of endless waters and mountains saying hello. You’re surrounded by it, and no matter how many times you admire it, it never stops being amazing.

For those of you wondering, we did end up finding the Japanese Garden. When I was a university student, I used to go to to the Japanese garden (called Nitobe Garden) on campus all the time. It was my favourite place at UBC and losing free admission there was one of the saddest parts of graduating. For that reason, I was very excited to visit Mayne Island’s Japanese Garden and it didn’t disappoint. Breathing this place in was the perfect break between writing sessions.


On the final day of the retreat, we woke up early to catch the 7:45 AM ferry back to Vancouver. I’m not really a morning person (not an evening person either actually. Mid-afternoon is perfect, thanks), but seeing the sun rise like we did that day makes me think I should re-consider this early morning thing. Maybe they’re worth it after all.

If you’d like to follow my talented friends online, here is Sarah H’s Twitter and Carly’s Twitter. They are also roommates and co-hosts of Toffee and Fudge, an A+ writing website. If you’re a writer looking for writing tips and resources, definitely check them out! Grace is currently #NoTwitterGrace, but you can visit her on Instagram where she shares spreads from her gorgeous bullet journal. Also, a special shoutout to our friend Susan for sending us a giant box of snacks to power us through the weekend. Susan, you’re the best!

Until next time, Mayne Island!

on healing

This is a piece I wrote back in February and posted on my blog at the time. I re-read it today and wanted to share it on this new space as well. This is for me, for you, and for everyone who has ever had good days and bad days.


I call them good days and bad days, but really they’re more like hours, sometimes minutes. A good day for two hours and then a bad day for the next seven. Good for thirty minutes, bad for forty-five.

My good days feel like this: Hope like honey melting on my tongue. I breathe and I feel my lungs fill with air instead of water. Laughing feels easier and so does getting out of bed. I don’t feel like myself exactly, but I feel more familiar, like I’m recognizing myself again. The present feels tender, but when I hold it in my hands like this, I can feel its heartbeat flutter in my palms and I understand that this is what it is to be alive.

The bad days are like this: My world starts shrinking and it doesn’t stop until every star has been squeezed out of the sky and all that’s left is me and my broken mind. I’m trapped on a train that only goes in circles and every mirror I look into shows me someone I don’t know. The past is the sun and today is its shadow. I know I can fight this sinking feeling, flip it on its head and turn it all around, but I am too tired to try again.

Isn’t that one of the worst parts? When you become so exhausted you stop caring. You stop saying I love you to the people you love, not because you don’t anymore, but because your heart is so fractured it’s hard to connect even the truest of words. You want to be someone better, but you can only be who you are right now and that makes you hate yourself. But maybe that is the secret to healing. You can only be who you are right now so instead of beating yourself up for it, be kind to your bruises. Let yourself be.

I was under the impression that healing meant every day would be better than the last until one day, I would emerge good as new, but it turns out healing is not so linear. Healing is good days and bad days, falling into the same pits over and over again, and somehow finding enough thread of compassion to climb your way out one more time. The more you keep catching these threads, the more the good days begin to outnumber the bad instead of the other way around.

This is who I want to be: When it feels like a fist is closing around the sky and crushing every star, I want to be someone who closes her eyes and sees the sunrise in her mind. Even if it feels like a lie to remember something so far from reach, I want to remember that the real lie is that the light is gone for good, and the truth is that yesterday is the shadow and today is the rising sun.